The Evening Held It's Breath, and then.......
The evening held its breath, and then waited for inky midnight to exhale and melt into dawn. An early, rosy sky bloomed behind clouds plump and white. The morning trekked till midday when shadows cower and hunger turns your head toward home. The afternoon slept, resting on arms weary from toil. Dusk melted daylight and the evening crept in once more.
The evening held its breath, and then waited for inky midnight to exhale and melt into dawn. An early, rosy sky bloomed behind clouds plump and white. The morning trekked till midday when shadows cower and hunger turns your head toward home. The afternoon slept, resting on arms weary from toil. Dusk melted daylight and the evening crept in once more.
Wonderful interweaving of the prompt into the first sentence. Your imagery is wonderful. It reads well, very nice. Marvellous picture by the way, is it a creation of yours?
ReplyDeleteThe cycle of day. I love the simplicity of the painting
ReplyDeleteMy Aussie friend, from a land comparable in size to the U.S.,
ReplyDeletethis poem is eloquent - seriously. Your words HAVE VOICE!
I am going to copy this one down in my Great Quotes/Writings I Love Journal.
And the artwork is wonderful - but then, you know of my cloud love!
Excellent prose poetry..What else can I say?
ReplyDeleteThank you...what a lovely day you wove with your words.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the line. The entire poem going through the course of sunrise to sunset was a brilliant idea. I loved your use of the word melted.
ReplyDeleteI love your painting, it works so well with the descriptions of the daily trek of the sun.
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What a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteAnd I love LOVE the artwork!
Love the images in this poem! beautifully written.
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful, prose and painting both.
ReplyDeleteVery visual -- and well-done! Your blog's an interesting and fun place.
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